給聯(lián)合國秘書長Kofi Annan寫信，闡述你對世界和平現(xiàn)狀的看法和展望，以及對聯(lián)合國發(fā)揮更大作用的期待。

范文：為了便于同學們學習，我盡量講作文寫的簡單一點。

Dear Mr. Annan, Jan.8 2004-12-11

I am a college student from China, majoring in International Politics. I am honored to write to you to express my view on world peace.

In this ever-changing society, peace and development are the two permanent themes. People from around the world cherish a peaceful co-existence. However, we regret to find that world peace is in a worsening situation. Regional conflicts, miniature wars, aggressive wars and ethnic cleansing are nothing new, if not everyday occurrences. Global powers, such as the U.S., are destroying people’s faith in peace for economic or nationalistic reasons. If this undesirable trend could not be reversed, our global village, in my view, would be ruined sooner or later.

The United Nations, which is an international body coordinating a wide range of affairs, should take a leading role in bringing us a peaceful planet. I was hoping the UN, under your guidance, could do more to make our common dream – world peace – come true in the not too distant future.

Best wishes,

Respectfully yours

Zhang Ying (174 words )

gujing101：

Jan.8.2004

Mr.Kofi:

I am a college student from China . It is seen that you have done a a lot for the peace of the world ,and now the world indeed in a relative and jarless situation. But there also have many insecure factors .Just like the war in Iraq , and civil wars in some contries in Africa and South America .And some countries’ hegemonism is a challenge for the world’s peace .

So in my opinion , in the sooner days , the situation now will not have a great improvement , and the possibility of breaking out wars in some part of the world still exist .

Undoubtedly ,the UN plays a very important character in the world’s peace now .But I think the UN should strengthen it’s influence and be the main character .

Best wishes !

Yours ，

Gujing 101

錯誤很多吧，哪些不足，希望老師能指出來

錯誤：

1. and now the world indeed in a relative and jarless situation. / and now the world is in a…. situation

2. some countries’ hegemonism is a challenge for the world’s peace . / some countries’ hegemonism is a challenge to the world peace

3. in the sooner days / in the days to come

4. and the possibility of breaking out wars in some part of the world still exist / and the possibility of the outbreak of wars still exists in some parts of the world

5. the UN plays a very important character in… / … a very important part in

6. should strengthen it’s influence and be the main character. / should spread its influence and be a major force in promoting the world peace.