注：1. 本段開始舉例

　　2. Let's take……for example 中間是插入語，表示強調，舉例不宜太長。

　　In conclusion, I believe that everyone is born equal and is the builder of his own fate We can have good fortune only if we take pains and work hard. We should bear the following saying in mind, “Every man is the master of his own fate.”

　　注：bear sth. in mind：把……牢記在心

　　范文13. The Way to Success

　　第二段：Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success. A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit.

　　He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Dr. Sun Yat-sen was such a man. Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty. Diligence means steadiness in one’s work and study. Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep attentive to studies. Marx often worked 15 hours a day. Life is short and we have many things to do. Without diligence no one can achieve anything.

　　II、社會熱點話題寫作邏輯結構

　　Paragraph 1: (1) 概括性的引出要評論的事物或觀點(general);

　　(2) 具體描述這個事物或者觀點(或者是我對這個現象/ 事物的基本看法specific)。

　　Paragraph 2: (1) 作者對該現象貨問題的基本看法，即文章的論點句;

　　(2) 支持性的細節分論點(至少兩點);

　　(3) 本段總結(可以省略)。

　　Paragraph 3: (1) 總結全文，定下結論(通常為我的對策或看法)。

　　四級作文試題2000年1月

　　Directions:

　　For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my College Education. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1. 上大學的費用(tuition and fees)可以通過多多種途徑解決。

　　2. 哪種途徑適合我(說明理由)。

　　How I Finance My College Education

　　How I Finance My College Education

　　第一段：首先，應該是用一種描述性的語言引出討論的重點：

　　Nowadays/ At present/ Currently/ These days/ Today, tuitions and fees for college students are 【more expensive】 much higher than ever before. How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern.

　　第二段：有多種的方法，例如：1.向父母; 2.銀行貸款 3.打工掙錢

　　第二段主題句：There are many ways to support my college education financially./ Ways to support my university study financially vary greatly/ are various.

　　第二段分寫：

　　In the first place, I can get/ gain/ obtain all the money from my parents.

　　In the second place, I can apply for/ ask for a bank

　　loan, especially set up/ established for college students/ undergraduates.

　　What’s more, I can find a part time job to earn enough money.

　　第三段：我所贊同的方法(闡述原因，為何不選其他的方法)。

　　Personally/ As far as I’m concerned/ In my opinion/ From my point of view/ To my way of thinking/ As I see it, I prefer the bank loan for the following reasons.