Different people have different addiction to(preferences for) books. They read different books just to meet their different needs. Because different people have different meets to read the different kinds of books. From this we can also see that different people have different intentions and notions. So they choose the different things to meet their needs in every facet in life.

　　I like reading poetry because I think poetry can make me calm, pleased, comfort(comforted), (and) I can see many beautiful thing(things) in the poetry.

　　點評：(1)基本切題。

　　(2)第二段表達有點亂。

　　(3)語言錯誤相當多，其中有一些是嚴重錯誤。

　　例4.(11分段)

　　Book is the source of life. When we read a book, we should not only linger on the surface of a book, but also we should(刪掉) master its intrinsic. As is charted in the blank, we can see clearly that a majority of the university students in America are addictet(addicted) to the popular fiction, and a minority of student like reading the science, poetry.

　　Why do they like reading popular novels? In my opinion, popular novel books are usually interesting, earthly, close to our lives. In contrast, science, poetry books are usually serious, dull and difficult. Therefore, most of the students prefer the popular novels.

　　I like reading the since book(science books). For one thing, it can make me enhance my speciality knoweledy(specialized knowledge); In addition, it can help me know the frontier about my speciality and master the newest things in since(science); thirdly, it can give a good chance to know a lot and can help me to study the useful subject when I graduate from the university.

　　點評：(1)本文基本切題，表達思想清楚。

　　(2)文字連貫，語言通順。

　　(3)有一些語言錯誤。

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