Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Social Practice of College Students. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)各大學在假期都會組織學生參加各種社會實踐活動

　　2)這些活動給大學生帶來了哪些好處

　　3)參加社會實踐活動應該注意些什么

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　　行文思路

　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現象，提綱第2點要求分析這種現象帶來的好處，提綱第3點要求指出注意事項，由此可判斷本文應為現象解釋型作文。

　　根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：概述大學生社會實踐活動及其主要內容;分析社會實踐活動給大學生帶來的好處;指出大學生參加社會實踐應該注意些什么。

　　高分范文

　　Social Practice of College Students

　　Nowadays many universities encourage and organize students to take part in social practice activities. During the holidays, more and more students choose to [1]be the volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other practical activities alike. It’s obvious that social practice is playing a more and more important role in China’s college education.

　　[2]Undoubtedly, college students have [3]benefited a lot from social practice. [4]Above all, they are provided with more opportunities to contact the real world outside the campus. [4]Moreover, in social practice activities, students can [5]apply their knowledge to the solution to the practical problems. So their practical skills are improved greatly. [4]Besides, social practice helps [6]strengthen students’ sense of social responsibility.

　　[7]Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is necessary for college students to participate in social practice. [4]However, social practice may bring some problems. For example, some students spend too much time in taking part-time jobs so as to ignore their study. [4]Therefore, we should try to [8]balance the relationship between social practice and study.

　　【亮點點評】

　　[1]平行結構。alike意為“類似的”，作后置定語。

　　[2]“毫無疑問”，副詞使用恰當。

　　[3]“從…中受益很多”。

　　[4]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。

　　[5]“把知識運用到解決實際問題中”。

　　[6]“加強社會責任感”。

　　[7]用于得出結論。considering用作介詞，意為“考慮到，鑒于”。

　　[8]“平衡…之間的關系”。