Some others think that money is the root of all evil. Due to the greed for money, people will do various kinds of evil things, such as stealing, robbing or even murder. Money can easily change a kind, honest man into a cruel, cunning woe.

　　In my opinion, both of the above-mentioned viewpoints go to an extreme. Money itself is neither good nor evil. It all depends on how we look at it. We can not deny the importance of money in the modern society. Meanwhile, we should not ignore the fact that something can not be bought by money, such as friendship, true love and so on.

　　這兩例都是采用了對應寫作方式，將提示中的三句分別擴展成三段，三段之間相互銜接，構成一個完整的篇章。

　　2 .調整法

　　盡管是提綱式寫作，提綱所提示的只是文章所要包括的主要內容，卻不是文章的結構模式，一般情況下，同學們應根據英語文章的類型，重新安排文章。如上面有關 " 錢 " 的一個寫作，按照英語的表達習慣，最好是加上一個引子。

　　What is money? To this question, different people hold differently. Some thing money is the source of happiness, while some regard it as the root of all evils. As far as I am concerned, they both have their reasons

　　Those who consider money as the source of happiness argue that money means massive house, beautiful clothes, or luxurious cars, and can enable them and their families live comfortably. They even believe that money can bring power, friendship, and love. But due to the temptation of money, there are many people who become thieves, robbers, or murderers. It is also out of the greed for money that some officials forget their duty and cause enormous losses to the country, so some people think that money is the root of all evil and suggest that we keep away from money.

　　In fact, money is merely a medium of exchange. It may bring you happiness; it may lead you to a life of crime. Whether it is good or bad depends on how it is used.

　　二、 首段和尾段的寫作

　　上一講中我們介紹了段落的擴展模式，也就是說，我們已經了解了文章中間一部分的敘述模式。根據四六級寫作的特點，一般首段和尾段都要自己補上，那么怎么才能寫好首尾段呢，下面我介紹一下，首尾段的寫作方式。

　　1 .首段的寫作

　　首段的寫作方式一般為：

　　運用事實性信息、調查或故事等引出話題， 2 )導入主題，然后提出自己的觀點，也就是文章的論點

　　首段開篇的方式常見的有：