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　　Media and Shopping

　　With numerous technological advances, various kinds of media have been well developed. As a result, an increasing number of people are fond of purchasing goods with the help of media, such as newspapers, radio stations, TV stations and the Internet.

　　As we know, there are always two sides to everything and shopping via media is no exception. On the one hand, it saves much time, money and effort to purchase goods through media since you don’t have to go to the shops in person. Besides, you can choose what you want from an enormous variety of goods on display. On the other hand, you may be cheated sometimes by the false information and suffer a considerable loss.

　　As far as I am concerned, shopping via media brings great benefits to our life and our economy on the whole. At the same time, we need strengthened supervision over the information released via media. In this way, we can gain more benefits from shopping via media and reduce the possible harm to a minimum.

　　【點評】

　　文章屬于現象解釋型文章，首先從時下非常流行的網上購物現象入手，接著指出該事物的優勢和缺陷，最后表明“我”的看法。文中精彩詞匯包括：with the help of，suffer a considerable loss，brings great benefits to，on the whole，gain more benefits from，reduce the possible harm to a minimum等。