According to the above statements, we can see that what one needs is a strong will.Weak-willed people never climb to the top.They crumble at the slightest use of force against them.Strong-willed people, on the other hand,will stand up against all odds and will make it a point to succeed ultimately.

　　【點評】

　　本文屬于觀點論證型作文。其中的觀點是一句英語諺語。文章首先以解釋說明諺語的含義入手進入主題，緊接著分析成功與失敗的原因，逐步論證毅力對于成功至關重要這一觀點，最后總結說明一個人要取得成功所要具備的素質。這樣文章對觀點的分析透徹又有深度。另外文中使用的精彩語句包括：due to，many a famous man，overcome apparently insuperable obstacles，stand up against all odds等等。

　　模擬訓練三

　　【范文】

　　A Campaign Speech

　　Good morning, everyone:

　　I am a sophomore student.I am especially honored in having this chance today to work out a new prospect of our Student Union.

　　As for the position of President, I find I am quite qualified.Firstly, I do possess the ability required of this post.In the past 2 years, I have been serving as Class President, and I know the importance and art of management.In addition, my personality fits ideally in for the past.I have been growing up in a loving environment, nursing an optimistic nature out of me.And in my dictionary, there is no such word as “difficulty”.Last but not least, nothing can be more important than my various hobbies in helping build up a teamwork with fellow students.

　　My fellow students, if I am fortunately chosen to be President by you, I’ll do my utmost.I’ll work to build up a fantastic teamwork to better the efficiency of the Union and better serve the student body.More exciting and significant activities are awaiting you to participate in.I won’t let you down.

　　Thanks for your attention.

　　【點評】

　　本文是一篇競選演講詞。文章首先表達心情，做一下簡單自我介紹，進一步說明自己競選此職務的原因，最后展望未來做出承諾，以表示感謝的語句結束演講。文章符合演講的格式以及內容要求。其中精彩語句，例如：work out a new prospect，an optimistic nature，build up a teamwork with，以及句式I won’t let you down.的使用使文章極具煽動力，起到很好的演講效果。