(一)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Immoral Behavior in Public. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:

　　1.我們經(jīng)常在公共場(chǎng)合見到各種不道德的行為，敘述你的一次相關(guān)經(jīng)歷。

　　2.這些不文明行為會(huì)有哪些影響。

　　3.我們應(yīng)該怎樣改善這種現(xiàn)象。

　　●審題概述●�r

　　這是一篇議論文，可以根據(jù)作文要求列出提綱：第一部分，列舉不文明行為并敘述一次相關(guān)經(jīng)歷;第二部分，不文明行為的影響，一兩個(gè)即可;第三部分，提出建議。

　　【范文】

　　Immoral Behavior in Public

　　To witness 1immoral behavior in public, one need only visit the Beijing subway. I still remember the first time I took the Beijing subway. It was an early morning. I was in a hurry to go to school. When I was trying to get a ticket, I found a lot of people waiting in front of me, but nobody was in the line.

　　1Immoral behaviors in public 2initiate a series of problems. One of the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our 3sense of social responsibility. We will keep ignoring other people’s rights and feelings, and in turn, we too will be disrespected some day.

　　The reform of1 this phenomenon is certainly not easy. With an eye on practical 2implementation and 3cost effectiveness , I propose that society make it clear in every way that people who fail to respect the ④common good will be seriously punished. Stricter policies for this should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible.

　　We all expect “A World without Thieves". Everyone 1shares the huge responsibility of 2demonstrating his or her justice at the proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious socialist society.

　　◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　作文要求第一點(diǎn)，相關(guān)經(jīng)歷

　　◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

　　1 immoral behavior in public：直接點(diǎn)題

　　◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　不文明行為的影響

　　◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

　　1 immoral behavior in public：重復(fù)名詞詞組，與第一段銜接

　　2 initiate：意思是“產(chǎn)生，發(fā)動(dòng)”

　　3sense of social responsibility：意思是“社會(huì)責(zé)任感”

　　◇第三段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　如何改善這些現(xiàn)象

　　◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

　　1 this phenomenon：指代前文“immoral behavior in public”，與上文銜接，且避免重復(fù)

　　2implementation：意為“執(zhí)行，實(shí)施”

　　3cost effectiveness：意為“成本效率”

　　④ common good：意為“公益”

　　◇第四段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　總結(jié)

　　◇語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

　　1share a huge responsibility: 意為“承擔(dān)重大責(zé)任”

　　2demonstrate：意為“展現(xiàn)”

　　(二)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Should We still Cherish Chinese Traditional Virtues. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:

　　1. 當(dāng)今的年輕人越來(lái)越強(qiáng)調(diào)個(gè)性發(fā)展;

　　2. 發(fā)展個(gè)性是否意味著忽視中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)美德;

　　3. 你的觀點(diǎn)。

　　●審題概述●�r

　　這是一篇議論文，題目比較大。主要討論個(gè)性發(fā)展和傳統(tǒng)美德之間的關(guān)系。根據(jù)提示，可分為三部分：年輕人的個(gè)性發(fā)展，可以適當(dāng)舉例;個(gè)性發(fā)展是否意味著忽視傳統(tǒng)美德，可以籠統(tǒng)地講，也可以具體地解釋某一種美德;最后提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。

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