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　　本文是一篇論述你對網(wǎng)絡(luò)與人們生活關(guān)系的文章。第一段，側(cè)重簡述網(wǎng)絡(luò)給人們生活的多彩、便利。第二段，詳述網(wǎng)絡(luò)與人們生活的緊密度。第三段，論述對網(wǎng)絡(luò)依賴的觀點。

　　【范文】1：

　　 How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?

　　If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life.

　　Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. Companies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if they’d seek international cooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for communication, entertainment, banking and shopping.

　　True, the power of the Internet is all pervasive and its many negative effects are already visible. For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to their own fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to online pornography and violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence. In view of all this, you are advised to use the Internet with wisdom. Keep it at a safe distance and never lose yourself.

　　◇第一段思路點評：

　　綜述網(wǎng)絡(luò)給人們生活帶來的多彩和便捷。兩個長句足矣。第一句用if引導(dǎo)的條件句引出“網(wǎng)絡(luò)”話題，第二句概述網(wǎng)絡(luò)帶給多彩和便捷的生活。

　　◇語言點提示：

　　has drawn…, realized, and provided此為謂語連動式的運(yùn)用。

　　◇第二段思路點評：

　　詳述網(wǎng)絡(luò)與人們生活的緊密關(guān)系，先總述，后分述。

　　◇語言點提示：

　　resort to借助、訴諸、求助于

　　◇第三段思路點評：

　　先陳述人們對網(wǎng)絡(luò)的依賴，再談對此的看法。

　　◇語言點提示：

　　(1)negative effects副作用、反面作用

　　(2)addicts成癮者、依戀者

　　(3)fantasy world虛擬世界、虛幻世界

　　(4)pornography色情表演、色情作品

　　(5)fraud欺騙、詐騙