2010年12月英語六級作文預測及范文(2)

　　Part Ⅰ Writing (30 minutes)

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled A Harmonious Society in My Mind. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.

　　1. 建立和諧社會成為了一種潮流和趨勢

　　2. 我心中的和諧社會是….

　　3. 為了建立和諧社會，我們應該如何去做?

　　【話題分析】

　　和諧社會是目前中國建設的目標之一，是比較熱門的社會話題。報紙、雜志、電視新聞等，經常討論此話題。考生應多關注社會新聞，為寫作收集素材。

　　【范文解析】

　　Nowadays, it seems known to everybody that one of the objectives of China's modern construction is to build a harmonious society. All of a sudden, "a harmonious society" has become a frequently-used phrase in media news, newspaper etc. It is the trend of China's development.

　　But what is a harmonious society? In my mind, there are several aspects included in building a harmonious society. First, a harmonious society has democracy in its politics to ensure the maximum benefits of the people. Second, a harmonious society has equality and justice to protect the rights of every citizen. Third, a harmonious society has good faith and friendly relation between people to create a favorable atmosphere for living and doing business. Forth, a harmonious society has energy to make sure its creativity. Fifth, a harmonious society has stability and order to provide people with a comfortable environment. Sixth, a harmonious society has harmony between humankind and nature for a sustainable development of economy.

　　To be true, it needs joint efforts of every person in China to realize this great goal. For me, I am a student in college. What I can do is develop good relations with people around me, help others as much as possible, spread this awareness to as many people as possible, laying a foundation for this tall building.

　　文章一開始就提到目前中國現代化建設的目標之一，就是構建和諧社會。一時之間，構建社會成為中國發展的趨勢。

　　第二段從六個方面講述了和諧社會的內涵：1)民主政治，保證人們的最大利益;2)公平正義，保證每個公民的權利;3)誠信友好，為生活和生產提供良好環境;4)充滿活力，確保社會的創造力;5)穩定有序，保證生活平穩安定;6)人與自然和諧相處，實現經濟可持續性發展。

　　第三段從自身出發，討論在構建和諧社會時自己該如何做。作為一名學生，作者認為：和周圍人發展友好關系，樂于助人，傳播“和諧社會”的意識，為這個宏偉目標奠定基礎。

　　【高分妙招】

　　六級作文很貼近國家大事，因為對時事政治的了解是對當代大學生的要求之一。出現一個新的命題，考生應多關注其內涵及相關評論，這樣寫作過程中才能做到“胸有成竹”，寫出來的作文才“言之有物”。

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