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題目一：Directions: You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there. Write him a letter to
1) make an apology, and
2) suggest a solution.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)
第一篇(jmwang1982)Dear Bob,
I’m writing the letter to tell (you) that I brought your music CD with me which I borrowed from you last Sunday. I feel sorry about it.
（But）Please don’t worry. I have got a solution to the problem. I want to post it to you by air express, because I think it is the fastest and safest (way). Do you have any other perfect(better) suggestions? Please tell me as soon as possible.
I’m looking forward to your reply and wish you all the best.
Your sincerely,
Li Ming
Sara點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章結(jié)構(gòu)比較完整，基本覆蓋了題目中要求的得分點(diǎn)，但要注意連接詞在文中的應(yīng)用！
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