上海新東方 靳萌

　　題目：

　　a letter declining a job offer

　　1. 對公司提供職位表示感

　　2解釋為何不能接受提供的職位

　　3希望諒解，并表示對公司的良祝愿

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I have received the letter from your corporation offering me the opportunity to work as an assistant manager. Thank you very much for your kind offer of this precious opportunity!

　　However, I have to say sorry for not being able to accept your offer. Shortly after applying for this position in your corporation, I received the admission letter from UCLA and was told this world-famous university would like to accept me as a graduate student in their Business School. After serious consideration, I have finally made the decision to go to the US first for my postgraduate study, which will absolutely promote my future career development .

　　So I would like to apologize that I have to decline your kind offer, but I believe that after my graduation, if I’m still lucky enough to get such great chance to work for you, I will definitely be a more capable team player in your corporation.

　　Finally, I love to offer my undying gratitude for all the efforts you have made in processing my application, and your kind understanding is highly appreciated.

　　Wish you a Happy New Year and wish your corporation even greater success in 2006!

　　With my best regards,

　　Jane

　　六級作文參考范文(11分版)

　　上海新東方 吳澤楊

　　下面，以05年12月六級作文為例，我們選用一篇11分段的現場文章，分析其特點。首先要指出的是，選用11分段的現場例文是因為，對大多數考生來說，這個目標更現實一些。

　　Dear Sir/Madam,

　　I am pleased with your offer of the position as a salesman. Thank you very much for your appreciation and kindness.

　　Unfortunately, I have to say sorry for this opportunity. Several reasons may account for my decision. Firstly, your company is far away from my home, which means that the cost for my traffic is likely to be greater than what I expected. Besides, as an experienced salesman, I wish very much to be a sales manager, to be frank. Last but not least, the company, ABB, shares the opinion above. In other words, it agrees to double my salary, and offers me the position I want.

　　From what has been discussed above, I cannot help but turn down your offer. Though people in growing numbers are waiting for this, I strongly believe that I am a top one in this field. Sorry! Anyhow, thank you again for your efforts, with best wishes. Obviously, there is little doubt that further attention will be paid to this issue.

　　Yours,

　　Norman

　　本文171個字，盡管仍然有少量較生硬的套用，和部分不妥表達，但其結構完整，思路清楚，中心突出，層次分明，語言靈活，無重大語言錯誤。保守估計，11分數段是完全可以拿到的。在該文中，我們不難看出，它比較成功的借用了“中心句＋1、2、3”模式，英文文章的結構和清晰表達得以顯現。所以，握好英語作文考試特征和得分技巧，就能寫出一篇不錯的六級作文。同時，英語寫作的提高和模式的固化，有助于英文思維和應用能力的提高。