There is no denying that, however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen, which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that, however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型，還有however作為插入語，function in the disservice of替換do harm to
Emerging代替appearing ( fading代替disappearing )
Net citizen網民，屬于精彩用詞
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds替換Every coin has two sides
Computers do play，do強調
Positive替換important / good等
A slice of替換a part of
Unfavorable替換bad
Impacts替換effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of…使用插入語
Fruits (而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換advantage ( defects替換disadvantage )
Facet替換aspect
各位同學，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點，作文怎么會不得高分呢!
以下是30個最經典的替換詞，各位同學可以參考一下。
1.individuals,characters, folks代替(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad，如果bad做表語，可以有be less impressive代替
e.g. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many,if not most)代替many.
注：用many, if not most一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。
E.g. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理用most, if not all ,代替most.
5: a slice of, quiet a few , several代替some
6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,hold the view that, it is widely shared that,it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因為是書面語，所以要加that)
7:affair ,business ,matter代替thing
8: shared代common
9.reap huge fruits代替get much benefit )
10:for my part ,from my own perspective代替in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing代替more and more(注意沒有growingly這種形式。所以當修飾名詞時用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.
E.g. sth has gained growing popularity.
Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
12.little if anything,或little or nothing代替hardly
13..benefitial rewarding代替helpful be beneficial of
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,代替customer
15.exceedingly,extremely代替very
16.hardly unnecessary, hardly inevitable ...代替necessary, inevitable
17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb代替sb take interest in
18.capture one's attention代替attract one's attention.
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代indicate, suggest ,fear
21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger代替cause.
22. There are several reasons behind sth代替..reasons for sth
23.desire代替want.
24.pour attention into代替pay attention to
25.bear in mind that代替remember
26. enjoy, possess代替have(注意process是過程的意思)
27. interaction代替communication
28.frown on sth代替be against , disagree with sth
29.to name only a few, as an example代替for example
30. next to/virtually impossible,代替nearly impossible
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