1．Where there is a will, there is a way

The well-known proverb “Where there is a will, there is a way” has long been accepted by all of us. It is meant to show that however challenging or difficult a way is, a strong will may help conquer all the difficulties and eventually lead to success. I fully agree with it and its implication, in my opinion, can be justified in three respects.

First of all, what a man thinks in mind often transmits into one’s behavior. As it is widely recongnized that thought decides behavior, nothing will be hard to a determined and persistent person. Secondly, no one can deny that constant effort brings success, so long as a man woks with perseverance and uses a right way. Last but not least, confronting with enormous difficulties or frustration, only a man holding a steel will can get through and embark on a new way with a promising prospect.

Living in an age when the modern competition becomes more and more fierce, a strong will seem more than necessary. With this awareness, people can cope with what they will encounter in the future better and confront all the challenges more calmly and confidently.

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The well-known proverb “Where there is a will, there is a way” has long been accepted by all of us. It is meant to show that however challenging or difficult a way is, a strong will may help conquer all the difficulties and eventually lead to success. (這句話寫得非常出色，是你自己寫的嗎？) I fully agree with it and its implication, in my opinion, can be justified in three respects.

First of all, what a man bears in mind often turns into one’s action. As it is widely recognized that thought decides behavior, nothing will be hard to a determined and persistent person. Secondly, no one can deny that constant effort brings success, so long as a man works with perseverance and chooses the right way. (此句可繼續(xù)修改，改得更理想，解決原句不平行的問題，細看：Secondly, constant efforts always lead to success – so long as a person stands firm and aims high, success will not be far away.) Last but not least, confronting with enormous difficulties, only a man with an iron will can pull through and embark on a new way with a promising prospect. (此句也寫得不錯)

Living in an age when the modern competition becomes more and more intense, a strong will seems more than necessary. With this awareness, people can cope with what they will encounter in the future better and stand up to confront all the challenges more calmly and confidently.