◇第一段思路點評：

　　陳述校園盜竊案件發生的情況

　　◇語言點提示：

　　it seems that此句型表示一種可能性

　　◇第二段思路點評：

　　說明被盜原因

　　◇語言點提示：

　　(1)What makes students the easy targets?此句引出下文

　　(2)anti-theft alertness防盜意識

　　(3)lack of alertness缺乏警惕

　　(4)light-fingered小偷小摸的、慣行扒竊的

　　◇第三段思路點評：

　　闡述如何加強防盜意識

　　◇語言點提示：

　　注意關聯詞語in the first place，Besides，In addition的使用可使行文更富邏輯性。

　　(三)How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?

　　1. 網絡提供給了人們豐富多彩和便捷的生活

　　2. 很多人開始感覺離開網絡寸步難行

　　3. 你對網絡依賴癥的看法

　　● 審題概述●�r

　　本文是一篇論述你對網絡與人們生活關系的文章。第一段，側重簡述網絡給人們生活的多彩、便利。第二段，詳述網絡與人們生活的緊密度。第三段，論述對網絡依賴的觀點。

　　【范文】1：

　　 How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?

　　If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life.

　　Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. Companies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if they’d seek international cooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for communication, entertainment, banking and shopping.

　　True, the power of the Internet is all pervasive and its many negative effects are already visible. For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to their own fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to online pornography and violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence. In view of all this, you are advised to use the Internet with wisdom. Keep it at a safe distance and never lose yourself.