◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評：

　　綜述網(wǎng)絡(luò)給人們生活帶來的多彩和便捷。兩個長句足矣。第一句用if引導(dǎo)的條件句引出“網(wǎng)絡(luò)”話題，第二句概述網(wǎng)絡(luò)帶給多彩和便捷的生活。

　　◇語言點(diǎn)提示：

　　has drawn…, realized, and provided此為謂語連動式的運(yùn)用。

　　◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評：

　　詳述網(wǎng)絡(luò)與人們生活的緊密關(guān)系，先總述，后分述。

　　◇語言點(diǎn)提示：

　　resort to借助、訴諸、求助于

　　◇第三段思路點(diǎn)評：

　　先陳述人們對網(wǎng)絡(luò)的依賴，再談對此的看法。

　　◇語言點(diǎn)提示：

　　(1)negative effects副作用、反面作用

　　(2)addicts成癮者、依戀者

　　(3)fantasy world虛擬世界、虛幻世界

　　(4)pornography色情表演、色情作品

　　(5)fraud欺騙、詐騙

　　【范文】2：

　　As a primary source of information as well as an efficient means of communication, the Internet offers people a colourful and convenient life. Just by clicking the mouse, we can enjoy a brilliant and easy life that could not be achieved ever before: shopping, making friends, contacting relatives, looking for jobs, downloading music and movies, conducting business deals, and freely airing our opinions.

　　For its convenience, the Internet has attracted people like magnets and some people even claim that it is indispensable. To them, life can’t go on without it. Every day millions of people spend hours on end surfing the Internet. They are obsessed with it so much so that they forget many other important matters.

　　As for me, I don’t approve of unrestrained Internet reliance. Although the Internet is a gift of the technological revolution and a blessing of this information age, we should never let it control our life. The Internet absolutely doesn’t mean the whole world to us. Instead, we should guard against its negative effects. To those Internet addicts, I would add: “Self-control can make or break your life. With proper use, the Internet serves you; otherwise, it kills you.”

　　(四)Craze for Civil Service Examinations

　　1. 現(xiàn)在有越來越多的大學(xué)畢業(yè)生報(bào)考公務(wù)員

　　2. 引起此現(xiàn)象的原因

　　3. 你的看法

　　● 審題概述●�r

　　本文是一篇主要論述大學(xué)生報(bào)考公務(wù)員增多的原因和對此看法的文章。第一段，主要綜述大學(xué)生報(bào)考公務(wù)員增多的現(xiàn)象。第二段，側(cè)重分析引起此現(xiàn)象的原因。第三段，重點(diǎn)談你對此的觀點(diǎn)。

　　【范文】

　　 Craze for Civil Service Examinations

　　Every year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees. Among them, college graduates are a fast-growing force that can’t be ignored. The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as it’s also gaining popularity among science and engineering students.