There are advantage for students to work while 1. _______
studying at school. One of them was that 2. _______
they can earn money. For the most part, 3. _______
students working to earn money for their own 4. _______
use. Earning their own money allow them 5. _______
to spend on anything as if they please. 6. _______
They would have to ask their parents for 7. _______
money or for permission to do things by 8. _______
the money. Some students may also to save 9. _______
up for our college or future use. 10. _______
答案及解析
1. advantage改為advantages。應使用可數名詞的復數形式。
2. was改為is。時態和整篇文章的時態不一致。
3. 此行無錯誤。
4. working改為work。此句缺少謂語動詞。
5. allow改為allows。主謂不一致, 動名詞做主語謂語用單數。
6. 刪除if。此處please作不及物動詞, 意為“喜歡, 想要”, as引導定語從句, 修飾先行詞anything。
7. would 后添加not。上下文邏輯有誤。
8. by改為with。by表示“使用”時, 其后不能使用定冠詞the, 故改為with。
9. 去掉to。may為情態動詞, 其后應使用動詞原形。
10. our改為their。代詞的指代不一致, 指代第三人稱復數形式的物主代詞應為their。
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