Section III Writing
Part A
51. 參考范文:
What a vivid and thought-provoking picture! We see that a large group of graduates come to a fork in the road and cannot decide which one they should take. It is clear that the picture wants to convey the confusion every college student must face when they graduate: hunting for an ideal job, taking part in the annual National Entrance Examination for Postgraduates, going aboard to achieve further education or starting their own business.
Undoubtedly, the decision one makes when he or she graduates will have an important or even a decisive influence on his or her life. The following factors, in my opinion, should be taken into consideration if one wants to choose the right way. To begin with, graduates should analyze and understand the different features of each road. For example, becoming an employee is far less desirable than starting one’s own business. However, enterprisers can get much greater satisfaction achievement than employees. Next, personality should be thought over. For instance, an introvert is more suitable for doing research and had better become a postgraduate. Family economic state should also be considered because some careers, such as starting one’s own business or going aboard, need more money than others.
In conclusion, in order to choose the right way, one must be both realistic and self-aware. Moreover, once having made a decision, one should work hard to achieve his or her goal.
【點評】
2013考研英語(一)的大作文仍然考察大家熟悉的圖畫作文,而且圖畫主題非常明顯,是關于畢業生面臨的選擇和迷茫這一社會熱點話題。相信廣大考生對這一話題并不陌生,看到圖畫也會有親切感,不會感到從無下手或無話可說。題目要求仍然是三點:描述圖片內容,分析圖片內涵并進行評論。進行評論時,我們可以從建議、原因、影響等方面進行展開。
分析好圖畫主題和題目要求之后,我們開始對文章進行布局謀篇。對于考場作文,尤其是考研圖畫或圖表作文,最容易掌握的是三段式寫法。
第一段簡要描述圖畫內容,然后引出主題。可以用上一些萬能句式,比如在描述圖畫內容是可以用What a vivid and thought-provoking picture! We see that… 在引出圖畫主題的時候,可以用It is clear that the picture wants to convey (that)…/It is clear that the picture wants to tell us (that)…/What lies behind the picture is (that)…
第二段我們可以給出建議,分析一下對于畢業生來說如何才能做出正確的選擇;也可以分析原因,比如為什么在面臨諸多選擇時,畢業生會感到迷茫;還可以分析影響,畢業生面臨選擇時的迷茫會對他們的人生道路產生什么影響。注意,在列舉論點和論據時,要注意使用序列詞,讓論證條理清晰。
第三段可以對第二段內容進行總結,用in conclusion等表示總結的詞引出。當然,如果你在第二段論述原因或影響,那么第三段也可以給出建議。
Part B
52. 參考范文:
Dear professor,
I am writing on behalf of the School of Foreign Language of Peking University to invite you to be a judge for the English speech contest to be held in our university.
We know that you have lots of experience and do have an eye for the brilliant performance in English speech contests. We would be appreciated if you could spare your time on Friday, May 10. The contest will be held in the auditorium from 3 p.m. to 6 p.m. Judges to be invited include another two professors who are very familiar to you.
We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please contact us at 1234567 if you have any question.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【點評】
2013年考研英語(一)應用文(小作文)仍然考察信函,要求給外教寫封郵件,邀請他來做英語演講比賽的評委。
既然是信函,那么首先要注意對信函格式的把握,注意開頭稱呼語和最后的落款。其次,內容應該包括必要的細節。這需要大家發揮一下想象力,思考一下邀請對方做演講比賽的評委需要告知對方哪些細節,比如為什么要邀請他,比賽的時間地點在哪里等等。
在文章布局上,建議分三部分展開。開頭直接表明自己的身份和寫信目的;第二部分描述細節,告知比賽的時間地點等。第三部分強調迫切期望對方能夠參加并期待對方答復。
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