考試吧：2014考研英語(yǔ)小作文優(yōu)秀范文賞析

　　8-10分

　　第一篇

　　Dear Dr.Wang,

　　There will be a conference about global environment held at auditorium in our university on January 5th. We would be honored to have you there with us.

　　The occasion will start at 9:00 in the morning. This will be followed by a brilliant speech from our foreign guests. At around 10:00 a.m., a debate of environmental issues will be given by students from both China and America.

　　I really hope you can make it. RSVP before next Friday.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語(yǔ)作文批改點(diǎn)評(píng)如下：

　　Dear Dr.Wang,

　　There will be a conference about global environment held at auditorium in our university on January 5th. We would be honored to have you there with us.

　　The occasion will start at 9:00 in the morning. This will be followed by a brilliant speech from our foreign guests. At around 10:00 a.m., a debate of environmental issues will be given by students from both China and America.

　　I really hope you can make it. RSVP before next Friday.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　9分

　　同學(xué)你好，作文寫(xiě)的很好 ，沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，但是內(nèi)容要是再豐富一些會(huì)更好。

　　考研英語(yǔ)待批改作文：

　　8-10分

　　第二篇

　　Dear Xiaoqiang,

　　There will be a banquet to celebrate the admission of Beijing University for our best friend Tracy in my home on January 5,2013. We would be honored to have you there with us.

　　The occasion will start at five O'clock in the afternoon. This will be followed by a hearty dinner which my wife will cook. At around seven O'clock,we will hold a small dancing ball that I think everybody would enjoy it.

　　I really hope you can make it. RSVP before December 28,2012.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語(yǔ)作文批改點(diǎn)評(píng)如下：

　　Dear Xiaoqiang,

　　There will be a banquet to celebrate the admission of Beijing University for our best friend Tracy in my home on January 5,2013. We would be honored to have you there with us.

　　The occasion will start at five O'clock in the afternoon. This will be followed by a hearty dinner which my wife will cook. At around seven O'clock,we will hold a small dancing ball that I think everybody would enjoy it.

　　I really hope you can make it. RSVP before December 28,2012.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　10分

　　同學(xué)你好，作文寫(xiě)的非常不錯(cuò)，繼續(xù)保持!

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