考試吧：2014考研英語小作文優秀范文賞析

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　8-10分

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I just read an advertisement in a magazine about job searchingI would like to apply for a position as a sales manager.

　　I understand efficient marketing strategy .My communication skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your conditions in the advertisement .I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a bachelor degree in marketing management. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a salesman at ABC Company during my spare time. .

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　8-10分

　　Dear Mr. Yu,

　　I just read an advertisement in job-hunting website about recruiting some positions of your company. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.

　　I understand it is essential to master a solid foundation for computer science. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Peking University with a bachelor degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an intern at a company where I have attained a fair knowledge and experience.

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　8-10分

　　Dear Mr. Yu,

　　I just read an advertisement in job-hunting website about recruiting some positions of your company. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.

　　I understand it is essential to master a solid foundation for computer science. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of Peking University with a bachelor degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an intern at a company where I have attained a fair knowledge and experience.

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Mr. Yu,

　　I just read an advertisement in(改為on) job-hunting website about recruiting some positions of(改為for) your company. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.

　　I understand it is essential to master a solid foundation for(改為of) computer science. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I am a recent graduate of the(刪除) Peking University with a bachelor degree in Computer Science. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an intern at a company where I have attained a fair knowledge and experience.

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　8分

　　同學你好，要注意控制字數，考研的時候超過20個詞扣0.5分,超過50詞只給1分辛苦分。標點符號與后面的單詞空一格。你的作文沒有大問題，但是你對介詞的使用不太清楚，這說明你的語感還不太好，因此，建議你多讀一些英文書籍。

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