考研英語待批改作文:
8-10分
第一篇
Dear Tommy,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you timely returning admission ticket to me.
If it had not been for your assistance in warmheartedly picking up my admission ticket and getting it back to me, I fear that I would have been missed my law exam held for once a year.
Every one agrees that it was you who came to help me and saved me from the trouble. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Jane Yang
考研英語作文批改點評如下:
Dear Tommy,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you timely returning admission ticket to me.
If it had not been for your assistance in warmheartedly picking up my admission ticket and getting it back to me, I fear that I would have been missed(改為missing) my law exam held for once a year.
Every one agrees that it was you who came to help me and saved me from the trouble. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Jane Yang
8分
同學你好,作文寫的很不錯,但是要注意虛擬語氣的用法,建議再復習一下。
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