考研英語待批改作文:
8-10分
第二篇
Dear Eleven
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your encouragement to me. If it had not been for your assistance in my Olympic Game in Maths. I fear that I would have been give it up early.
Every one agrees that it was you who encouraged me to persist on the game all the time and always helped me make a lot of preparations for the game, so I had the confidence in myself and won the game at last. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點(diǎn)評(píng)如下:
Dear Eleven,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your encouragement to me. If it had not been for your assistance in my (加上study of)Olympic Game in Maths(奧數(shù)是Mathematic Olympiad ). I fear that I would have been give(改為giving) it up early.
Every one agrees that it was you who encouraged me to persist on the game all the time and always helped me make a lot of preparations for the game, so I had the confidence in myself and won the game at last. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
8分
同學(xué)你好,這篇小作文整體來講寫的不錯(cuò)。建議你如果遇到某些不確定但又不是非常重要的專有名詞,可以改為其他有把握的詞,例如本篇作文中提到的奧數(shù),完全可以改為其他的比賽。
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